二、阅读下面材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
2、 Read the following materials and write an article of no less than 800 words according to the requirements.
有一部电影名叫“十全九美”,这个片名本身就耐人回味。
There is a movie called "Ten Complete and Nine Beautiful", and the title itself is unforgettable.
这个片名引发了你怎样的联想和思考?请写一篇文章。
What associations and thoughts did this title evoke in you? Please write an article.
要求:选准角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
Requirements: Choose the right angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, and draft the title on your own; Do not copy or plagiarize; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
【范文参考】:
[Sample reference]:
缺憾处,见圆满
Shortcomings, see completeness
电影《十全九美》的片名,如同一面棱镜,折射出生活的真相:世间本无绝对完美,缺憾恰是光照进来的地方。
The title of the movie "Ten Complete and Nine Beautiful" is like a prism, reflecting the truth of life: there is no absolute perfection in the world, and imperfections are where light shines in.
历史的长河中,缺憾是文明进步的伏笔。 戊戌变法虽未实现“君主立宪”的全盘目标,却以“公车上书”的呐喊、“百日维新”的改革,撕开封建专制的铁幕,启蒙了近代中国的民族意识与变革思潮;雅典民主“仅成年男性公民享有政治权”的狭隘性是缺憾,却开创了“民主治理”的先河,为现代民主制度提供了精神源头与实践参照。这些历史实践的“缺憾”,恰似文明进步的“未完成式”,推动着思想与制度的革新。
In the long river of history, shortcomings are the foreshadowing of civilization progress. Although the Hundred Days' Reform did not achieve the overall goal of "constitutional monarchy", it tore open the iron curtain of feudal autocracy with the cry of "official vehicle petition" and the reform of "hundred day reform", and enlightened the national consciousness and reform trend of modern China; The narrowness of Athenian democracy, which only granted political rights to adult male citizens, is regrettable, but it pioneered the concept of "democratic governance" and provided a spiritual source and practical reference for modern democratic systems. The "shortcomings" of these historical practices are like the "unfinished form" of civilization progress, driving the reform of ideas and systems.
艺术的画卷里,缺憾是审美张力的留白。 断臂维纳斯缺失的双臂,未减损其美,反而让观者凭借想象填补空白,赋予雕塑“千人千面”的永恒艺术张力;《红楼梦》曹雪芹生前未完成全本,后四十回的争议与补写,因“未完”激发无数读者、学者的解读与研究,催生“红学”这一文化现象。艺术作品的“缺憾”,成为激发受众参与、拓展审美空间的“催化剂”,成就独特美感。
In the scroll of art, the flaw is the blank space of aesthetic tension. The missing arms of Venus do not diminish its beauty, but instead allow viewers to fill in the gaps with imagination, giving the sculpture an eternal artistic tension of "a thousand faces and a thousand people"; Cao Xueqin did not complete the entire version of "Dream of the Red Chamber" before her death, and the controversy and supplementary writing of the remaining forty chapters have inspired countless readers and scholars to interpret and study it, giving rise to the cultural phenomenon of "Redology". The "shortcomings" of artistic works become the "catalyst" to stimulate audience participation and expand aesthetic space, achieving unique beauty.
人生的旅途上,缺憾是自我超越的跳板。 苏轼一生屡遭贬谪、仕途坎坷,却在黄州赤壁“乱石穿空,惊涛拍岸”的凝视中,参透生命真谛,于文学、哲学层面实现双重超越,成就“一蓑烟雨任平生”的精神境界;残奥运动员身体的残缺,未阻挡逐梦脚步,他们在赛场上以拼搏诠释“完美”的另一种形态——超越自我即为圆满。个体经历的“缺憾”,倒逼反思、激发潜能,成为自我实现的“跳板”。
On the journey of life, regrets are the springboard for self transcendence. Su Shi was repeatedly demoted and had a bumpy career throughout his life, but in the gaze of the "flying rocks piercing through the sky and the waves crashing against the shore" on the red cliffs of Huangzhou, he understood the true essence of life and achieved a dual transcendence in literature and philosophy, achieving the spiritual realm of "letting a misty rain last a lifetime"; The physical disabilities of Paralympic athletes do not stop them from pursuing their dreams. They interpret another form of "perfection" through their hard work on the field - surpassing oneself is perfection. The "shortcomings" of individual experiences force reflection and stimulate potential, becoming a "springboard" for self realization.
当代人困于“完美焦虑”,执着于“十全”却畏于“九美”。不妨以“九美”为生命底色,在缺憾中锚定追求的方向。缺憾从不是终点,而是生命向完美奔赴的注脚。正如杨绛先生所言:“我们曾如此渴望命运的波澜,到最后才发现,人生最曼妙的风景,竟是内心的淡定与从容。”接纳缺憾,方能在不完美的世界里,寻得属于自己的圆满。
Contemporary people are trapped in "perfect anxiety", clinging to the "Ten Perfections" but fearing the "Nine Beauties". May we use the "Nine Beauties" as the foundation of our lives, anchoring the direction of our pursuit amidst our shortcomings. Shortcomings are never the end, but the footnotes of life's journey towards perfection. As Mr. Yang Jiang once said, "We once longed for the waves of fate, but only in the end did we realize that the most beautiful scenery in life is inner calmness and composure. Only by accepting our shortcomings can we find our own perfection in an imperfect world.
【材料分析】
[Material Analysis]
“十全九美”这个片名打破了人们对“十全十美”的常规认知。“十全十美”代表了一种完美无缺的理想状态,而“十全九美”则表明即使看似趋近完美,也仍存在一定的缺憾。它引导我们思考生活中“完美”与“缺憾”的关系,以及如何看待这种不圆满。
The title "Ten Perfect and Nine Beautiful" breaks people's conventional understanding of "perfection". 'Perfect and perfect' represents an ideal state of perfection, while 'ten perfect and nine beautiful' indicates that even if it seems to be approaching perfection, there are still certain shortcomings. It guides us to think about the relationship between "perfection" and "imperfection" in life, and how to view this incompleteness.
【立意方向】
【 Intentional Direction 】
1.接受不完美,拥抱真生活
1. Accept imperfection and embrace real life
生活中,人们往往追求事事完美,但实际上,瑕疵与不足总是如影随形。“十全九美”启示我们要以平和的心态接受生活中那“一分”的不完美,明白不完美也是生活的常态。就像维纳斯雕像,断臂成为其独特之处,增添了无尽的艺术魅力。我们应学会接受生活中的不完美,不过分苛责自己和他人,以平和心态面对生活中挫折、缺陷等,珍惜当下拥有,用心感受生活真实的美好。
In life, people often pursue perfection in everything, but in reality, flaws and shortcomings always follow closely. The "Ten Perfections and Nine Beauties" inspire us to accept the imperfections in life with a peaceful attitude, and understand that imperfection is also a normal state of life. Just like the Venus statue, the severed arm becomes its unique feature, adding endless artistic charm. We should learn to accept imperfections in life, not overly blame ourselves and others, face setbacks, defects, etc. in life with a peaceful attitude, cherish what we have now, and feel the true beauty of life with our hearts.
2.缺憾成就别样美
2. Shortcomings create a unique beauty
“十全九美”中的“九美”已经是一种较高的水准,那“一缺”并非是全然的坏事,反而可能成就别样的美。就像“月有阴晴圆缺”,缺月之景也别有一番韵味。从人生角度看,挫折与失败带来的不完美经历,能让人积累经验、磨砺意志,成就独特人生风景。在文学作品中,悲剧结局往往给人留下更深刻的印象,因为其中蕴含的遗憾让故事更具感染力。从这个角度立意,可以探讨缺憾如何为事物带来独特的审美价值和深度。
The "Nine Beauties" in the "Ten Complete and Nine Beauties" are already of a relatively high level, and "one deficiency" is not entirely a bad thing, but may actually achieve a different kind of beauty. Just like the saying 'the moon has its ups and downs', the scenery of the missing moon also has its own charm. From a life perspective, the imperfect experiences brought about by setbacks and failures can help people accumulate experience, hone their willpower, and achieve unique life landscapes. In literary works, tragic endings often leave a deeper impression on people because the regrets contained in them make the story more infectious. From this perspective, we can explore how shortcomings bring unique aesthetic value and depth to things.
3.在不完美中追求完美
3. Pursuing perfection amidst imperfection
“十全九美”并不意味着放弃对完美的追求,而是在认识到不完美的前提下,依然努力靠近完美。袁隆平致力于杂交水稻研究,虽深知科研道路困难重重,成果也并非十全十美,但他始终不懈追求,让更多人摆脱饥饿,向着粮食产量更高、质量更好的完美目标不断迈进。我们在生活中也应如此,以不完美为起点,持续努力,在追求完美的过程中实现人生价值。
The phrase 'Ten Perfections and Nine Beauties' does not mean giving up the pursuit of perfection, but rather striving to approach perfection while recognizing its imperfections. Yuan Longping is committed to the research of hybrid rice. Although he knows that the scientific research path is full of difficulties and the results are not perfect, he has always been relentless in his pursuit to help more people escape hunger and move towards the perfect goal of higher grain yield and better quality. We should also do the same in life, starting from imperfection, continuously striving, and realizing our life value in the process of pursuing perfection.
同时,“十全九美”也提醒我们,在追求完美的道路上,不能过于苛求绝对的完美。追求完美是积极向上的态度,但如果陷入对完美的过度执念,可能会给自己带来巨大的压力,甚至错过生活中的美好。我们应在追求卓越的同时,懂得适时放下对那“一分”完美的执着,享受追求过程中的收获和成长。
At the same time, the "Ten Perfections and Nine Beauties" also remind us that in the pursuit of perfection, we cannot be too demanding of absolute perfection. Pursuing perfection is a positive attitude, but if one falls into an excessive obsession with perfection, it may bring tremendous pressure to oneself and even miss out on the beauty in life. We should not only pursue excellence, but also learn to let go of our obsession with perfection and enjoy the rewards and growth in the pursuit process.
4.换个角度看缺憾
4. Looking at the shortcomings from a different perspective
当我们从不同的视角审视“十全九美”中的“一缺”时,可能会发现它并非真正的缺点。比如在团队中,每个成员都有自己的特点,看似不完美的地方,换个角度或许就是独特的优势。以这种立意可以引导人们培养多元思维,学会从不同层面看待事物的不足,挖掘其中潜在的价值。
When we examine the "one deficiency" in the "Ten Perfections and Nine Beauties" from different perspectives, we may find that it is not the true flaw. For example, in a team, each member has their own characteristics, and seemingly imperfect areas may be unique advantages from a different perspective. This concept can guide people to cultivate diverse thinking, learn to view the shortcomings of things from different perspectives, and explore their potential value.
.立意参考:
Intentional reference:
①放下完美执念,接纳不完美的自己;
① Let go of the obsession with perfection and accept your imperfect self;
②追求完美理想,接受现实缺憾;
② Pursuing perfect ideals and accepting the shortcomings of reality;
③努力超越现实,不断追求完美。
③ Strive to surpass reality and constantly pursue perfection.